Don't tell me i'm too young


that i'll understand when i am older

Because those are just words

and age is just a number

No matter how many years are thrust upon my life

i will never comprehend 

how beautiful our bodies look

with no soul

I would rather be left in the dark


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Comments (7)

  1. jameshsternberg

    This is really a good poem by bestessay service reviews and a thought provoking poem.The message in the poem is really very fantastic and amazing for all the people.Misunderstanding is the part of life and many people face this.

    October 27, 2016
    1. giirluncovered

      I’m glad you liked it

      October 30, 2016
  2. brainfood35

    Now that’s what I call poetry.

    January 08, 2017
    1. giirluncovered

      Thank you so much

      January 22, 2017
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  4. iamscared

    just being nitpicking but…a body without a soul? left in the dark misunderstanding? I really liked everything up to these two lines…i just think…maybe this:

    i will never comprehend how beautiful our bodies look without limits

    I would rather be left in the pains of my sacrifices

    this is really bad form from me (rude for me to butt in) but just a suggestion.

    January 27, 2017
  5. giirluncovered

    Thank you!

    October 30, 2016