Can i please get some critisism

So i wrote this yesterday just out of know where, and it explains me down to the inner most thought and i wanted to see if it sounded good or if im just crazy [CENTER]Weird, Strange....Insane? I think i am insane, possibly a little strange, i make it...

bilefs

i would like to know what people think of my righting. and you can put down what you belive in as long as its about the discussion i put on there if possible plz. Random Ok I�m going to start off by saying thanks for reading this. I will start off by...

Scribbles Challenge #46

Greetings and Salutations Scribblers This week our challenge is a word ; a ScrabblesChallenge, if you will. We wish you to write your piece using all of the following words [CENTER]Essence Saddened Altruistic Bounce Perpendicular Bile Guess...

Diaries of mine

I'm writing my diaries here to let it as stories that happened to me in my life.

Scribbles Challenge #45

This week we feature the: Theme: …. The context of your write we ask you to write about being in a time and place that you have always really wanted to be. Remember: You may write in any style, genre, or form. Once your entry is complete, post it on...

Erotica?

I hope discussion on erotica is allowed here. This is what I wrote. Fellow thinkers, i would appreciate all feedback http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/universeexplorer/436921/ and this is the unfinished book...

Scribbles Challenge #44

Welcome fellow Scribblers to this weeks Challenge. This time, we seek to inspire you with an image, an engraving by the 'impossible' artist MC Esher, entitled Relativity. Our usual rules apply - take your inspiration from this image, but do with that...

Anecdotes

Write your accounts of interesting, amusing events in your life . I'm sure we all have them.

Scribbles Challenge #43

This week we feature the: …. The beginning of your Opening line must read: ---- Remember: You may write in any style, genre, or form. Once your entry is complete, post it on your blog site, then come to the Scribbles Challenge announcement in the...

circus and life

Now a days,there is no life in circus because there is full circus in life.

CM is our King

[COLOR="DarkRed"]Today is the day! The day the king had died He led his life serving the people for thy shall be loved forever. Never has this world thought thought that he would die never has he left anyone anyone in need in poverty for he shall be...

Lavender Orchid

Lavender Orchid I was a mountain climber. I fell down a cliff and broke both my legs. But I climbed out and got back up. I was foreigner. I was imprisoned fourteen years on charges I was innocent of. But I got out and I got over it. I was a little...